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Mar 11

Max’s holiday brochure

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  1. Thomas

    Great pictures and fantastic use of conjunctions.Can you use a wider range of commas.

  2. Olivia

    amazing work Ethan i love your holiday brochure

  3. Olivia

    amazing work max i love your holiday brochure

  4. Alexia

    Great use of conjunctions to extend your sentences and Adjectives to describe.Also great use of facts and opinions.

  5. Thomas F

    good work could you write more.

  6. Jayden

    could you write some more

  7. Alexander

    good work can you write some more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  8. Maryam

    Great work, but you need to write some more. ( I’m saying this because you said that to me!)

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