The Arrival of Spring

Friday, April 26, 2013

It was late in the afternoon, the emerald green grass swayed in the gentle breeze. Crows, swallows and Thrushes chirped joyfully, whilst soaring from tree to tree. Meadows of daisies surrounded me. The cyan blue sky reflected on the windows of cottages. Horses galloped around paddock to paddock. Their golden honey fur glimmered in the beaming, saffron sunshine. Its powerful rays blinded anything that lay eyes on it. All of a sudden I had witnessed the shoots of spring. The shoots could just be seen, I felt really excited  knowing that I got to see the arrival of spring. Flowers opened to reveal their delicate petals.

By Elizabeth in year 5



  1. Lynda D (Team 100WC) says:

    What a beautiful piece of writing. I could almost smell the spring air and hear the birds. Lovely descriptions. Very well done.

  2. elizabeth says:

    Thank you I’m proud of my work.

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