I like this Summer – I can picture two people supporting one another out at sea – I especially like ‘ Just us in the dark salty water, the comfort of each other’.
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I love this poem x
Thank you abby.
I like this Summer – I can picture two people supporting one another out at sea – I especially like ‘ Just us in the dark salty water, the comfort of each other’.
Thank you Mr Procter. I got some of the words from ‘Kensuke’s Kingdom’ by Michael Morpurgo- a book we are reading in year 6!
I bet they will be relieved when they reach their destination. I like ‘screaming wind’ and ‘growling sea’. Very powerful.
Amazing poam Summer out of this woorld!
Very good poem Summer. Well done.