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1. Abigail s on May 15, 2012 at 2:59 pm said:

   I love this poem x

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   • Summer.S on May 15, 2012 at 7:26 pm said:

     Thank you abby.

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2. Mr Procter on May 15, 2012 at 7:28 pm said:

   I like this Summer – I can picture two people supporting one another out at sea – I especially like ‘ Just us in the dark salty water, the comfort of each other’.

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   • Summer.S on May 15, 2012 at 7:40 pm said:

     Thank you Mr Procter. I got some of the words from ‘Kensuke’s Kingdom’ by Michael Morpurgo- a book we are reading in year 6!

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3. Mr Bolland on May 15, 2012 at 9:44 pm said:

   I bet they will be relieved when they reach their destination. I like ‘screaming wind’ and ‘growling sea’. Very powerful.

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4. Jess C on May 17, 2012 at 6:29 pm said:

   Amazing poam Summer out of this woorld!

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5. Tiegan on May 22, 2012 at 2:34 pm said:

   Very good poem Summer. Well done.

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