Writing persuasive letters in 3B.

3B have been writing persuasive letters today. They have been trying to persuade their parents or other family members to let them have a pet.

Would their letters persuade you to let them have a pet?

About Mr Bolland

Comments

  1. mrsfairburn on May 22, 2012 at 7:35 pm said:

    Well done 3B. I think your letters are very persuasive. You have given lots of reasons why you should be allowed to have a pet.

  2. Mr Procter on May 22, 2012 at 7:51 pm said:

    You have included some good persuasive phrases and reasons in your writing 3B – so I think your parents should all say yes – including the request for a pet leopard.

  3. Dominic G on May 23, 2012 at 11:50 am said:

    They look cool.

  4. Caitlin on May 24, 2012 at 3:48 pm said:

    I really like your letters and I hope you will get your pets.

  5. Laila on May 26, 2012 at 10:07 am said:

    thanks for all the comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  6. Wow them letter’s are great if you were writing them to me I would have to get you a pet or even 2

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