Eliza writes a poem

Please leave me a comment about my poem – thank you

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  1. Mr Procter on May 15, 2012 at 7:18 pm said:

    I can picture you drifting on the sea Eliza – on a raft maybe. Hope it never really happens!

  2. Mrs Spencer on May 15, 2012 at 7:44 pm said:

    Today in Year 4, my group had to describe different kinds of sea, calm and stormy. Some of these year 6 poems would have shown great examples on how to use really strong words.

  3. Mr Bolland on May 15, 2012 at 9:29 pm said:

    I like this poem Eliza. I especially like how you described the sea as ‘bubbling’. Well done.

  4. jamie on May 16, 2012 at 10:18 am said:

    wow

  5. Well done Eliza, a great peom

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