Jamie gets busy writing his poem

Please read my poem and comment – thank you

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  1. FANTASTIC WATER POEM JAMIE!
    GREAT DESCRIPTIONS-I LOVED THE RUSTY SHIP PART.

  2. Ruhina on May 15, 2012 at 4:49 pm said:

    I really like your poem Jamie!

  3. Jess C on May 15, 2012 at 5:35 pm said:

    Well done Jamie!

  4. Mr. Bolland on May 15, 2012 at 6:40 pm said:

    Great poem Jamie! I really like ‘the sea is bashing, smashing and crashing’. Really vivid description.

  5. Mrs Spencer on May 15, 2012 at 7:42 pm said:

    Jamie this is excellent

  6. Abigail s on May 24, 2012 at 11:53 am said:

    Good powerful words Jamie ,it makes me think I’m by a beach watching it .

  7. Finley Leighton on May 28, 2012 at 10:02 am said:

    awesome go jamie

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