Joseph’s written a poem called ‘Water, water, everywhere’

Please read my poem and leave comments – I can’t wait to read them,

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  1. Joseph Mc on May 15, 2012 at 2:50 pm said:

    I put some real effort, in to this piece of work.

  2. I like your peom, it has a story to it . Nice work.

  3. Angelika R on May 15, 2012 at 3:00 pm said:

    Its really good Joseph! and I bet you did put your effort into it 🙂

  4. Finley Leighton on May 15, 2012 at 3:03 pm said:

    wow well done it has a good story

  5. Amelia on May 15, 2012 at 4:19 pm said:

    Wow this is really good I love how the sea starts off rough then becomes calmer. I also like how you have put images in the background.

  6. Mr Procter on May 15, 2012 at 7:32 pm said:

    I love ‘mountains of waves crashing down’ – well done Joseph.

  7. Mr Bolland on May 15, 2012 at 9:45 pm said:

    I agree with Mr. Procter – that was my favourite part too. Like it Joseph.

  8. I love it so much

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