Josh writes a poem in 6C

Please leave me a comment about my poem, thank you.

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  1. Mr Procter on May 15, 2012 at 7:20 pm said:

    I like the simile you used there Joshua – ‘like a prison’ – it made me think you were trapped by the sea all around you.

  2. Mrs Spencer on May 15, 2012 at 7:46 pm said:

    I don’t want to be in this boat at all, you have ‘painted’ a picture in my mind that makes me want to leave your boat ! Well done Joshua

  3. Mr Bolland on May 15, 2012 at 9:31 pm said:

    Sounds quite a scary place to be Joshua. I definitely hope I never experience it. Great poem!

  4. This one of the best poem I have ever read,because he makes you think your their.

  5. Well done josh keep it up!

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