The Starry Eyes Poem

Please read and comment on my poem that I wrote this morning. Thanks

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  1. Kiki-P on May 15, 2012 at 3:44 pm said:

    I really enjoyed writing this poem and I’m so proud it made it onto the ‘blog’!
    Thanks for reading.

  2. Mr Procter on May 15, 2012 at 7:24 pm said:

    I think the idea of star being ‘starry eyes’ watching down on the sea works very well Keja.

  3. Mr Bolland on May 15, 2012 at 9:39 pm said:

    I like this idea too Keja. I think it would be extremely interesting to look down at the sea all day and night. Well done!

  4. Jess C on May 16, 2012 at 5:50 pm said:

    Very well done Kiki-P!

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