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Remembrance Day and descriptive writing

on November 11, 2016

In Year 6, we’ve been writing a description of Scrooge from A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens. We thought about his appearance, the way he walks and his personality. 

We have a celebrity in the class! Lily created a wreath of poppies with the school logo and her name in the middle. She has been in the newspaper! img_0047 img_0050

In Y6 we have been learning about A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens so we have been describing Scrooge from the story. Hope you enjoy.

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Grace did this very descriptive piece of writing about Scrooge. Even the first sentence makes me want to read more. What about you?

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Allthough short, it is a really descriptive so say a big well done in the comments to Lucy.

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Everyone has tried hard but Thomas has included lots of descriptive language about Ebenezer Scrooge.

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Annie’s writing is always interesting but this is beyond interesting. Her work is always excellent and this is no exception.

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Although short, Lucy’s work was really descriptive so say a big well done in the comments!

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Amber has written an excellent piece of work with very good adjectives.

Hope you enjoyed reading our blog, from Oliver, Amber, Lucy, Harry and Charlotte.


5 Responses to “Remembrance Day and descriptive writing”

  1. Amber says:

    Hope you enjoy this entry.

  2. mrparkin says:

    Wow – great writing Year 6. Lovely to see you back blogging again.

  3. Grace says:

    Wow! That’s all I can say! Just WOW!

  4. Brandon says:

    Good job lilli keep it up

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